能帮我看看我这句英文说得对吗?

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能帮我看看我这句英文说得对吗?
Please help book hotel for Stella from UK.Her job title is Senoire manager.

应该打错了吧,是senior manager才对吧~~!都没错啊,但是第一句不符合语言习惯啊~~
Please book a hotel for Stella who is from UK.
PS:这两句话应该不是一起的吧,不通啊