请帮我看一下这英语作文有没有什么语法之类的错误题意是针对偏科问题写观点HOW TO HANDLE YOUR HOMEWORKwe draw a conclusion by the survey of this situation.it shows that most of the students do the homework required strongly by teachers.some of them prefer to doing what they like in most time.while others againest it,they hold their view that it's not a good way to study because when we catch up with one subject,we fail in another one.so it's important to learn how to handle our homework.fro

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请帮我看一下这英语作文有没有什么语法之类的错误
题意是针对偏科问题写观点
HOW TO HANDLE YOUR HOMEWORK
we draw a conclusion by the survey of this situation.it shows that most of the students do the homework required strongly by teachers.some of them prefer to doing what they like in most time.while others againest it,they hold their view that it's not a good way to study because when we catch up with one subject,we fail in another one.so it's important to learn how to handle our homework.from my point of view,we should divide them into two parts:the important and the less important.besides,we ought to take up the time regularly.
whatever,the best way is decided to yourself.according to your own situation,make a list of studing.
看我码得这么辛苦 就请看一下吧……

问题很严重,内容略显枯燥,建议重新写一份,不要用生硬的表达方式。

从语法上的确是没什么问题;不过那个标点符号和后面字母的大小写问题就有了哦,LZ自己看看就知道了。
【【最近好久没上来混了。。楼主看着满意的话就采纳吧。。】】

注意一下大小写。while others are againest it. take up 变成handle
the best way to do

哈哈,我是初中的,有几个词不太明白矮~

最明显的,反对:be against,不能直接用against
感觉你这篇作文是背了很多的连接语,短语之后硬套上的吧.学以致用 还算是不错.
最后一段,不太理解……

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