英译中,我的翻译还可以吗?帮我修改一下,变得通熟一点谢谢

问题描述:

  After turning over all the scenarios we came up with one advantage: allowing me to experience motherhood an advantage set off by a list of disadvantages: high risk of childbirth for me sagging energy that would make us pant while chasing a toddler possible financial difficulties after retirement and even the embarrassment to hear someone say “Your grandson is really cute”.把所有的情况后,我们来到了一个优势:使我体验到母爱,优势被列为我的缺点:分娩的风险高,下垂,能让我们喘而追逐一个蹒跚学步的孩子,可能的财务困难,退休之后,甚至听到有人说“尴尬你的孙子真可爱”。这样翻译可以吗

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